Comments for little by little http://goni7.edublogs.org Just another Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 29 Nov 2007 23:14:03 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Assisted Suicide by goni7 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/11/29/assisted-suicide/comment-page-1/#comment-14 goni7 Thu, 29 Nov 2007 23:14:03 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/11/29/assisted-suicide/#comment-14 Thank you, Ringo, I will make a good essay. haha,,,,,,,, ah,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ioi Thank you, Ringo, I will make a good essay. haha,,,,,,,,
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]]> Comment on Assisted Suicide by Ringo http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/11/29/assisted-suicide/comment-page-1/#comment-13 Ringo Thu, 29 Nov 2007 22:54:47 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/11/29/assisted-suicide/#comment-13 Even though I don't agree with your opinion, I feel your essay is good. And I found some sentences which I couldn.t understand in introduction. And I think that you need a little more specific examples, and some sentences are not clear enogh. Even though I don’t agree with your opinion, I feel your essay is good. And I found some sentences which I couldn.t understand in introduction. And I think that you need a little more specific examples, and some sentences are not clear enogh.

]]> Comment on Assisted Suicide by Mike & Carol http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/11/29/assisted-suicide/comment-page-1/#comment-12 Mike & Carol Thu, 29 Nov 2007 22:51:41 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/11/29/assisted-suicide/#comment-12 Your introduction and body is good; however, you need to finish your 5th body paragraph and nedd more strong conclusion. Your introduction and body is good; however, you need to finish your 5th body paragraph and nedd more strong conclusion.

]]> Comment on Journal entry #5 by Steve http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/29/journal-entry-5/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Steve Wed, 07 Nov 2007 00:40:49 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/29/journal-entry-5/#comment-11 After I had a good English teacher in high school, I thought I wanted to be a teacher. But when I went to college I forgot about that. I never thought about it again, and I didn't really plan to be a teacher when I was an undergraduate, but now I'm a teacher. That is weird... After I had a good English teacher in high school, I thought I wanted to be a teacher. But when I went to college I forgot about that. I never thought about it again, and I didn’t really plan to be a teacher when I was an undergraduate, but now I’m a teacher. That is weird…

]]> Comment on Goni’s Introduction by Maya http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/09/04/gonis-introduction/comment-page-1/#comment-10 Maya Thu, 25 Oct 2007 04:17:20 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/09/04/gonis-introduction/#comment-10 You have cool blog! I like the picture you put up at the top of your blog page and I like the color of your blog, too! I didn't know that your favorite color is blue because I didn't see you use anything in bule "yet". Now I know. :) You have cool blog! I like the picture you put up at the top of your blog page and I like the color of your blog, too! I didn’t know that your favorite color is blue because I didn’t see you use anything in bule “yet”. Now I know. :)

]]> Comment on Journal #3 by Maya http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/12/journal-3/comment-page-1/#comment-9 Maya Thu, 25 Oct 2007 02:11:51 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/12/journal-3/#comment-9 I'm sure most of foreign students had the same experience as you did at first. But some of them might now open their mind to accept the new experience and new enviroment as you did. I think you are the lucky one because now you know how to turn everything into a positive experience. I’m sure most of foreign students had the same experience as you did at first. But some of them might now open their mind to accept the new experience and new enviroment as you did. I think you are the lucky one because now you know how to turn everything into a positive experience.

]]> Comment on Journal# 4 by Maya http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/23/journal-4/comment-page-1/#comment-8 Maya Thu, 25 Oct 2007 02:05:41 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/23/journal-4/#comment-8 Steven told me to tell you that your verb tense is PERFECT in this journal entry. I hate grammar, too. I think verb tense is the most useful part of everyday English language. But since your verb tense is "perect" I think you're OK. :) Don't just let one score get you down. Steven told me to tell you that your verb tense is PERFECT in this journal entry.

I hate grammar, too. I think verb tense is the most useful part of everyday English language. But since your verb tense is “perect” I think you’re OK. :)

Don’t just let one score get you down.

]]> Comment on Journal# 4 by Steve http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/23/journal-4/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Steve Tue, 23 Oct 2007 23:32:09 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/10/23/journal-4/#comment-7 I love grammar! Ha! Please let me know if you have ANY questions about grammar. Sometimes you may find that the more you learn about something, the deeper and more difficult it becomes. That can be a good sign! Honestly, your grammar has improved a lot since last spring, and that is not the only area of improvement. You are really benefitting in many ways by coming to the US. After you go back, I think you will realize all kinds of benefits you got by studying here. I hope I'm right... I love grammar! Ha! Please let me know if you have ANY questions about grammar.

Sometimes you may find that the more you learn about something, the deeper and more difficult it becomes. That can be a good sign!

Honestly, your grammar has improved a lot since last spring, and that is not the only area of improvement. You are really benefitting in many ways by coming to the US. After you go back, I think you will realize all kinds of benefits you got by studying here. I hope I’m right…

]]> Comment on Journal #2 – cause/effect prewriting by Haesung http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/09/27/journal-2-causeeffect-prewriting/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Haesung Mon, 01 Oct 2007 04:20:10 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/09/27/journal-2-causeeffect-prewriting/#comment-6 You choose good topic. Also your journal is interesting. Try to figure out how to write as essay. You choose good topic. Also your journal is interesting. Try to figure out how to write as essay.

]]> Comment on Journal #2 – cause/effect prewriting by mayanjie http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/09/27/journal-2-causeeffect-prewriting/comment-page-1/#comment-5 mayanjie Thu, 27 Sep 2007 19:50:00 +0000 http://goni7.edublogs.org/2007/09/27/journal-2-causeeffect-prewriting/#comment-5 the topic sentence is clear, maybe the cause is not enought for800 words' essay. your 2nd example is similar with the first one. I thought that would repeat. the topic sentence is clear, maybe the cause is not enought for800 words’ essay.
your 2nd example is similar with the first one. I thought that would repeat.

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